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Recycling rate of region household different countries between 2005 to 2015

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The line graph illustrates the recycling rates of regional households in the UK, Germany and France from 2005 to 2015 The recycling rate for UK and Germany showed a steady growth over the period of time. While percentage of recycled waste in France witnessed a down trend. In 2005, The recycling rates of UK and Germany was 35% and 20% respectively. UK growth stunned between 2007 and 2009 at 40% but after 2009 the country experienced a significant recycling growth rate which makes the country with most recycling rate of waste at 60% in 2015. Germany witnessed consistently steady growth rate from 2005 to 2015. France in 2005 was at 50% with most recycling rate of waste which experienced a constant decrease until 2013 since then the recycling rate increased by 10%. By 2015 France had least rate of recycling of waste at 40%.
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of regional households in the UK, Germany and France from 2005 to 2015

The
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for UK and Germany
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a steady
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over the period of time.
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percentage of recycled
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in France witnessed a down trend.

In 2005, The
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of UK and Germany was 35% and 20%
respectively
. UK
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growth
stunned between 2007 and 2009 at 40%
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after 2009 the country experienced a significant
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growth
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which
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the country with most
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of
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at 60% in 2015. Germany witnessed
consistently
steady
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growth
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rate
from 2005 to 2015.

France in 2005 was at 50% with most
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rate
of
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which experienced a constant decrease until 2013 since then the
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increased by 10%. By 2015 France had
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of
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of
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at 40%.
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IELTS academic Recycling rate of region household different countries between 2005 to 2015

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