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The map shows two proposed locations of a new restaurant in the city of Paris Overall, the River Seine runs from east to west across the center of the map with various tourist Location 1, in near the Right Bank it has a view of the river with the Eiffel Tower in the background and a park. On the North side of park is the Maritime Museum which attracts 8000 visitors each day, on the East side is the Aquarium with 2000 visitors each day Location 2, on the left Bank is between the Eiffel Tower and Art Gallery where tourists visit is 16, 750. The sports center is also quite close to the number of visitors 500 each day. It also has a view of the river and park. Opening a restaurant at location 2 have more potential with a total of 17, 250 visitors from the Eiffel Tower, Art Gallery together with Sports Center

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