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The given bar chart illustrates the value of one country’s exports in various categories in one year.

The given bar chart illustrates the value of one country’s exports in various categories in one year. o5Erg
The given bar chart illustrates the value of one country’s exports in various categories in one year. Overall we can see that the value of export for each product is over 50 billions dollar over one successive year. Petroleum products, Engineered goods and gems and jewellery stood at 60$ billions between 2015 and 2016. This was also the highest amount of yearly. Agricultural products stood at around 50$ billions dollars between the two year. Whereas textiles remained the same at around 50$ billions dollars throughout the period.
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bar chart illustrates the value of one country’s exports in various categories in one year.

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we can
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see
that the value of export for each product is over 50
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billions
dollar over one successive year.

Petroleum products, Engineered
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goods
and gems and
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jewellery
stood at
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$60".
60$
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billions
between 2015 and 2016. This was
also
the highest amount of yearly.

Agricultural products stood at around
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$50".
50$
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billions
dollars between the two year.

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Whereas
textiles remained the same at around
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$50".
50$
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billions
dollars throughout the period.
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IELTS academic The given bar chart illustrates the value of one country’s exports in various categories in one year.

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