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The bar chart illustrates the figure for residents who used the internet in various nations in the Middle East, units estimated by millions in June 2017.

The bar chart illustrates the figure for residents who used the internet in various nations in the Middle East, units estimated by millions in June 2017. pe5mD
The bar chart illustrates the figure for residents who used the internet in various nations in the Middle East, units estimated by millions in June 2017. Overall, as can be seen clearly from the chart that the data of Iranians using the internet was the highest number while the smallest user data was shown from the figure of Lebanon. Looking first at the top four countries, just over a half-million of Iranians accessed the internet in June 2017 and it was nearly double Saudi Arabia’s figure which accounted for just below 25 million users. In the meantime, there were exactly 14 million and about 8. 5 million internet users recorded for the count of Iraq and the United Arab Emirates, respectively. Regarding the remaining countries, the almost same levels were surveyed from four nations, just below 7 million internet users in the figure for Yemen (precisely 6. 91 million) and Israel (exactly 6. 64 million), followed by the user data of Jordan and Syria which were lying between 6 and 6. 5 million. By contrast, only 4. 6 million Lebanese surfing the internet in June 2017 were shown.
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in June 2017.

Overall
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from the chart that the data of Iranians using the internet was the highest number while the smallest
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of Lebanon.

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over a half-million of Iranians accessed the internet in June 2017 and it was
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which accounted for
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. In the meantime, there were exactly 14
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and about 8. 5
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internet
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recorded for the count of Iraq and the United Arab Emirates,
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Regarding the remaining countries, the almost same levels
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internet
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and Israel (exactly 6. 64
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, followed by the
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data of Jordan and Syria which were lying between 6 and 6. 5
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4. 6
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Lebanese surfing the internet in June 2017
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the figure for residents who used the internet in various nations in the Middle East, units estimated by millions in June 2017.

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