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The table illustrates the comparision of the registrations of the five types of transport.

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The table illustrates the comparision of the registrations of the five types of transport. Overall, the registration for all vehicles increased, although the growth in motorcycles and light trucks stand out most. Despite a smaller percentile increase, the totals for passenger vehicles were by far the highest and light trucks were lowest. In 2010, 11. 800. 000 passenger vehicles were registered in Australia, outstripping commercial vehicles (2. 300. 000), motorcycles (540. 000), heavy trucks (384. 000) and light trucks (106. 000). In the next 4 years, the number of 5 types of vehicles all increased, in which the number of motorcycles and light trucks changed the most strongly at 30. 8% (to 709. 000) for the old type and 23. 5% ( to 131. 000). Other categories also showed an increase, albeit a bit less pronounced, with numbers going as high as 13. 000. 000 (+ 10. 2%) for passenger cars, 2. 700. 000 (+17. 4%) for commercial vehicles and 416, 000 (+ 8. 3%) for heavy trucks.
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comparision
of the registrations of the five types of transport.

Overall
, the registration for all
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vehicles
increased, although the growth in motorcycles and
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light
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trucks
stand out most. Despite a smaller percentile increase, the totals for passenger
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vehicles
were by far the highest and
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light
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trucks
were lowest.

In 2010, 11. 800. 000 passenger
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were registered
in Australia, outstripping commercial
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vehicles
(2. 300. 000), motorcycles (540.
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), heavy
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(384.
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) and
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(106.
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000
). In the
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4 years, the number of 5 types of
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vehicles
all increased, in which the number of motorcycles and
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light
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trucks
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type and 23. 5%
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also
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an increase, albeit a bit less pronounced, with numbers going as high as 13. 000. 000 (+ 10. 2%) for passenger cars, 2. 700. 000 (+17. 4%) for commercial
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and 416, 000 (+ 8. 3%) for heavy
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.
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