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Sales of Coffee and Bananas from 1999 to 2004

Sales of Coffee and Bananas from 1999 to 2004 G3Npw
The two table shows the sales of the fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas between 1999 to 2004 in various countries. Although coffee and bananas do not correlate each other directly but their sales can gives valuable insights of eating habits of countries civilians. First we will look the coffee sales, It is quiet clear that coffee sales has been rises from 1999 to 2004 in all countries. Specially in the UK it increases more than 1000% compare to the Sweden it's only 2% (approximetly). Other countries also shows the significant increase in their coffe sales. For the bananas some contries face the fall in the sales like Sweden and Denmark. But in Switzerland sales moves up more than 200%. In the UK and Belgium shows the good hike in sales but not as much as coffee sale. To wrap up, It is clear that people eating habbits are changing over the perieod of time. In most of the countries coffee becomes the favorite choice for the refreshment than the fruit like Banana.
The two table
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between 1999 to 2004
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. Although
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and bananas do not correlate each other
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sales
can gives valuable insights of eating habits of
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countries
civilians.

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we will look the
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coffee
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sales
, It is
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quiet
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coffee
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sales
has been rises from 1999 to 2004 in all
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countries
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For the bananas
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like Sweden and Denmark.
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in Switzerland
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up more than 200%. In the UK and Belgium
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becomes the favorite choice for the refreshment than the fruit like Banana.

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