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The given two pie charts provide information about the percentages of online sales in Canada for different retail sectors. The data was collected in years 2005 and 2010. Overall, in the beginning of period video games contributed least in Canadian retail sectors while electronics and appliances was the most significant online sales sector in retail. However, at the end of the period, the food and beverages became the largest sales segment for retail market in Canada whereas the lowest contribution was made by home furnishings. It is obvious from the given figures that the online sales of video games was 18% in 2005 which was increased by 23% in 2010. A similar effect was observed in case of food and beverages which showed a rise of about 10% in 2010 with average sales of 32% compared to that of 22% five years back in 2005. On the other hand, electronics and appliances industry illustrated a downward trend from 2005 to 2010 when its sales fell from 35% to 30%. Similarly, home furnishing was the retail sector which also depicted 10% reduction in its sales when the data showed that the sales were 25% in 2005 but declined to 15% after period of five years.

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retail
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sectors
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 market in Canada whereas the lowest contribution was made
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 of video games was 18% in 2005 which was increased
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 a rise of about 10% in 2010 with average You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
 of 32% compared to that of 22% five years back in 2005.

On the other hand
, electronics and appliances industry illustrated a downward trend from 2005 to 2010 when its You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
 fell from 35% to 30%. Similarly
, home furnishing was the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeddle
retail
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sector
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sales
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