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The given a table that provided information about population living in for different types of houses in the the UK.

The given a table that provided information about population living in for different types of houses in the the UK. jo1b8
The given table illustrates the percentage of people who are living in four different kinds of houses in the three areas: central area, green park area, and south berg area in the UK. To begin with in central area, where the total population are 32, 100. Merely 15% of people live on flat and apartment. There is a gradual increase in individuals who are living on terraced house that is accounted for 18%. 28% of population select semi-Detached house for residing, and a majority people are living in Detached type of home. However, the highest people are residing on flat and apartment in the green park area that is nearly a three-quarter. Just 14% of individuals live on terraced house in this area. Only 5% of population select semi-Detached and Detached house in this area, which are the lowest. In this area, there are about 31, 700 people residing. In south berg area, in this area, there are about 32 thousand people residing. A quarter dwellers choose flat and apartment for residing. Interestingly, approximately a fifth population are living in terraced home that are the greatest. There is plunged in semi-Detached type of house at 5%, but it is surged to 14% in population who are living in Detached house. Overall, it can be seen from provided details that in the UK, the maximum population are chosen flat and apartment for living in green park area; in contrast, the minimum people selected semi-Detached and Detached type of house, whereas the highest people are living in Detached house in central area.
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different
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houses
in the three
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areas
: central
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area
, green park
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area
, and south berg
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area
in the UK.

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area
, where the total
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population
are 32, 100.
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people
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live
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flat
and
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apartment
. There is a gradual increase in individuals who are
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living
on terraced
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house
that
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population
select semi-Detached
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house
for
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residing
, and a
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majority
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people
are
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living
in
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Detached
type of home.

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in the green park
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select semi-Detached and
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Detached
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in this
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area
, which are the lowest. In this
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, there are about 31, 700
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people
residing.

In south berg
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, in this
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, there are about 32 thousand
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people
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residing
. A quarter
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dwellers
choose
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and
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residing
.
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, approximately a fifth
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population
are
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in terraced home that are the greatest. There
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house
at 5%,
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.

Overall
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that in the UK, the maximum
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flat
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apartment
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in green park
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area
;
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people
selected semi-Detached and
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type of
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house
, whereas the highest
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living
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house
in central
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.
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IELTS academic The given a table that provided information about population living in for different types of houses in the the UK.

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