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You should spend around 20 minutes on this task: The diagram below shows the environmental issues raised by a product over its life cycle. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

: The diagram below shows the environmental issues raised by a product over its life cycle. 7JK0b
The diagram illustrates the life circle of a product and how this process effect the environment. Overall, there are seven stages in this process, beginning with planning and design the product and finishing at the recycling step before starting a new cycle. These steps may impact on the environment. To begin the cycle, the product is planned and designed. After that, necessary materials and energy resources are consumed to prepare for the production stage. Then, product is manufactured in factories, packaged and distributed to shop and market. It is evident that these steps may cause some negative effect to the environment by emit carbon dioxide and industrial waste. In the next stage, products are sold to customers and used in life. Finally, customers give feedback to supplier to make improvement of the next product, some old product are disposal while some of those are recycled and became materials in the second step of the next cycle.
The diagram illustrates the life circle of a
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product
and how this process effect the environment.

Overall
, there are seven stages in this process, beginning with planning and design the
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product
and finishing at the recycling
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step
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before
starting a new cycle. These
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steps
may impact on the environment.

To
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begin
the cycle, the
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product
is planned
and designed. After that, necessary materials and energy resources
are consumed
to prepare for the production stage. Then,
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product
is manufactured
in factories, packaged and distributed to shop and market. It is evident that these
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steps
may cause
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some
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negative
effect to the environment by emit carbon dioxide and industrial waste. In the
next
stage,
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products
are sold
to customers and
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used
in life.
Finally
, customers give feedback to supplier to
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make
improvement of the
next
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product
,
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some
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old
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product
are disposal while
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some
of those
are recycled
and became materials in the second
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step
of the
next
cycle.
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IELTS academic : The diagram below shows the environmental issues raised by a product over its life cycle.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
156 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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