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The following table provides the data of e-waste (in tonnes) trashed and recycled in 2010 all around the world.

The following table provides the data of e-waste (in tonnes) trashed and recycled in 2010 all around the world. bbomB
The table illustrates the amount of e-waste that is trashed or recycled of seven different products all over world. Data is mentioned by EPA. Data is calibrated in tones. Overall, 2, 440, 300 is disposed combing all the products in which 27% of it is recycled. Televisions are highest disposer wheras, mobile devices are least disposed. To begin with, televisions are the most disposed with 1, 045, 000 tones of which only 17% is recycled. It is also the product which has the double in quantity as compared to the second highest disposer in tthe table provided. Meanwhile, moniters are second most disposed product with 595, 000 tones of which 33% is recycled and it is the highest recycled product in quantity. moreover, computers has the highest recycling rate with 40% of the proportion and 168, 000 tonnes in weight. Secondly mobile sevices are the least disposed with 19, 440 tonnes of which only 11% is recycled. THe least recycled product is keyboards and mice with 10% and has the disposal of 67, 860. Hard copy devices has the significant recycling rate of 33% which produce a disposal of 290, 000 tonnes. data for the tv peripherals is not included in the table
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, computers has the highest recycling rate with 40% of the proportion and 168, 000 tonnes in weight.

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copy devices has the significant recycling rate of 33% which produce a disposal of 290, 000 tonnes.
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