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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task: The bar chart below illustrates the use of tobacco products by secondary school students in the United States. Write a report describing the information shown.

: The bar chart below illustrates the use of tobacco products by secondary school students in the United States. Write a report describing the information shown. LBEqK
The bar chart reveals the proportion of student using different types of Tobacco product in middle school and high school. Overall, it is evident that students in senior school had a much higher tobacco consumptions compared to middle school ones. Any use was the most common type among both middle and high school students with 13% and 35% respectively. After that, there were about 27% of high school students who consumed cigarettes, which was three times greater than that of middle school students. Further down the list was ciggars with 15% of older group while the proportion of younger pupils was only 7%. The remaining products including Smokeless, pipes, bidis and kreteks were less popular choice. Only about 3% of middle school pupils using these types of tobacco product. Regarding the high school group, the percentage usage of smokeless, pipes, bidis, kreteks stood at only under 6%.
The bar chart reveals the proportion of
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using
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different
types of Tobacco product in
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middle
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school
and
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high
school.

Overall
, it is evident that
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students
in senior
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school
had a much higher tobacco
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consumptions
compared to
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middle
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school
ones.

Any
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use
was the most common type among both
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middle
and
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high
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school
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students
with 13% and 35%
respectively
. After that, there were about 27% of
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high
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school
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students
who consumed cigarettes, which was three times greater than that of
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middle
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school
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students
.
Further
down the list was
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ciggars
with 15% of older group while the proportion of younger pupils was
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only
7%.

The remaining products including Smokeless, pipes,
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bidis
and
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kreteks
were less popular choice.
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Only
about 3% of
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middle
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school
pupils using these types of tobacco product. Regarding the
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high
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school
group, the percentage usage of smokeless, pipes,
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bidis
,
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kreteks
stood at
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only
under 6%.
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IELTS academic : The bar chart below illustrates the use of tobacco products by secondary school students in the United States. Write a report describing the information shown.

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