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The line graph below illustrates the total money invested in books in 4 different nations Germany, France, Italy and Austria in the decade of the period starting with 1995. Overall, it is clear that all four countries experienced an upward trend throughout the period, while the numbers of people spent on books in Germany seem to outnumber compared with 3 others. To be specific, By 1995 $80 million dollars was accounted for money invested in books in Germany. Similarly, the figure for France and Italy in the first year was $55 million and $50 million respectively, while there were only 30$ million for Austria. Despite some fluctuations, Germany still led in the race for books investment compared to other countries with a total of almost $100 million by the end of the period. There was a steady rose in the expenditure on books in France, and this finally reached a figure of $75 million in 2005 which made France to be the second highest before Germany. This was similar to the number for Austria, where the money spent on books increased sharply to almost equal France with $72 by the end of the period. Italy experienced a slightly increase throughout the period, reaching a final figure of just over $60 million in 2005

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