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the frequency of different cosmetic surgeries among male and female Koreans.

the frequency of different cosmetic surgeries among male and female Koreans. Do3K6

Given are two bar graphs that showcase the frequency of different cosmetic surgeries among male and female Koreans. Later to taking a glance at two given graphs, it is easy to distinguish the cosmetic surgery with the highest and lowest repetition in both genders. Over three hundred eyelid procedures have been carried out for female Koreans in the year 2004, closely followed by Rhinoplasty, falling a little shy just under three hundred procedures. Male Koreans opted for hair transplantation more than anything else, with sixty procedures being carried out in the said year. However, the least performed surgery for female Koreans, liposuction, stands head and shoulders above the most prominent male one by roughly five hundred procedures, itself being just over one hundred. Abdominoplasty, being at the bottom of the barrel of male surgeries, pales in comparison to the rest of surgeries, with being considerably lower than twenty in the year 2004.

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Given
 are two bar graphs that showcase the frequency of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 cosmetic surgeries among male and female Koreans.

Later to taking a glance at two This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 graphs, it is easy to distinguish the cosmetic surgery with the highest and lowest repetition in both genders. Over three hundred eyelid You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmovetransactionproceedingformconductpractice
procedures
 have been carried
 out for female Koreans in the year 2004, closely
 followed by Rhinoplasty, falling a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 shy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 under three hundred You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmovetransactionproceedingformconductpractice
procedures
. Male Koreans opted for hair transplantation more than anything else, with sixty You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmovetransactionproceedingformconductpractice
procedures
being carried
 out in the said year.

However
, the least performed surgery for female Koreans, liposuction, stands head and shoulders above the most prominent male one by roughly five hundred You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmovetransactionproceedingformconductpractice
procedures
, itself being This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 over one hundred. Possible spelling mistake found.
Abdominoplasty
, being at the bottom of the barrel of male surgeries, pales in comparison
 to the rest of surgeries, with being considerably
 lower than twenty in the year 2004. 