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The table below shows the amount of number of employees and factories in England and Wales between 1859 and 1901 overview the table illustrates the total number of whale.

The table below shows the amount of number of employees and factories in England and Wales between 1859 and 1901 overview the table illustrates the total number of whale. 7LKQ3
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of manufacturing units located in England and Wales between1851 and1901.
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accounted for the highest of a force 9700
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in 1851
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its 710 19000 female workers in 1861 the workforce declined
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which made up for 16000 women unemployed 13780
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IELTS academic The table below shows the amount of number of employees and factories in England and Wales between 1859 and 1901 overview the table illustrates the total number of whale.

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