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The diagram describe the recycling process if aluminium cans

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The given process chart illustrate the information about the recycling method of aluminium cans. To embark with, in first step cans used by individuals and stored in dustbins. after that all rubbish loaded in truck for transportation. In third step cleaning, storting and cutting can be done and selected all good material. Nextly all aluminium cans send to heating machines for melting. Furthermore, in fifth step make rolled of aluminium sheet. It was 2. 5mm-6mm thick. After that arrive for recycling again and orginated new one. At the end, it mail for company reusing. In uk74%recycled can be done by masses. Overall, It can be clearly seen that the procedure in total in seven stage. however, all steps play numerous role in this processing.
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aluminium
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cans
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first
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step
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cans
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used
by individuals and stored in dustbins.
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after
that all rubbish loaded in truck for transportation. In third
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step
cleaning,
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storting
and cutting
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can
be done
and selected all
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good
material.
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Nextly
all
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aluminium
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cans
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send
to heating machines for melting.
Furthermore
, in fifth
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step
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make
rolled of
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aluminium
sheet. It was 2.
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5mm
-6mm thick. After that arrive for recycling again and
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orginated
new one. At the
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end
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mail
for
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company
reusing. In uk74%recycled
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can
be done
by masses.
Overall
, It
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can
be
clearly
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seen
that the procedure in total in seven stage.
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, all
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play numerous role in this processing.

IELTS academic The diagram describe the recycling process if aluminium cans

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
124 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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