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Meat consumption per type from 1979 to 2004

Meat consumption per type from 1979 to 2004 7LKQ6
The line graph illustrates how much meat of distinctive type had been consumed by the European nations since 1979 to 2004. Overall, despite having fluctuation European consumption of each meat declined while it was sharpest for bear usage whilst gradual in case of fish consumption throughout 25 years. From the embark of 1979, been accounted for about 220 gram per head, beaf was highest used meat though faced steap decline by 1979 and inclination in 1984, a point where sharp variation happened in its demand that equaled to 130 gram from 240 grams in 2004. likewise trend followed by lamb consumption from 110 gram to 80 grams per person in early 1979. Despite displaying ups and downs, chicken requirement kept escalating as it was 250 gram in 1999. Furthermore, fish meat consumption remained wavering though marginally from intial amount of 52 gram per head in 2004.
The line graph illustrates how much
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meat
of distinctive type had
been consumed
by the European nations since 1979 to 2004.
Overall
, despite having fluctuation European
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consumption
of each
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meat
declined while it was sharpest for bear usage whilst gradual in case of fish
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consumption
throughout 25 years. From
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of 1979,
been accounted
for about 220
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gram
per head,
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beaf
was
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highest
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used
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meat
though faced
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steap
decline by 1979 and inclination in 1984, a point where sharp variation happened in its demand that equaled to 130
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gram
from 240
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grams
in 2004.
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likewise
trend followed by lamb
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consumption
from 110
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gram
to 80
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grams
per person in early 1979. Despite displaying ups and downs, chicken requirement
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kept
escalating as it was 250
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gram
in 1999.
Furthermore
, fish
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meat
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consumption
remained wavering though
marginally
from
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intial
amount of 52
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gram
per head in 2004.
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IELTS academic Meat consumption per type from 1979 to 2004

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
146 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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