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Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant

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The chart gives data on immigration, emigration and net migration in UK over a nine - year period from 1999 to 2008. Overall, the figure for people who immigrated were much more than that emigrated. Net migration peaked at nearly 250, 000 in 2004 and nearly 220, 000 in 2007. These were 2 years with the most net migration. In 1999, more than 450, 000 people immigrated, and by 2003, the number had risen to more than 500, 000. Whereas, there was nearly 300, 000 in the figure for people left UK and moved to another countries and only increased by 181, 000 people from 1999 to 2003. Net migration had marginal fluctuation from 170, 000 to 150, 000 between 1999 and 2003. In 2004, net migration rapidly rocketed at nearly 250, 000 people. The number of net migration experienced a slight drop at 240, 000. Furthermore, in 2005, 2006, and 2008, the net migration fell gradually to 210, 000, 199, 000, and 180, 000, respectively. The year 2004 witnessed a sharp upward trend in the figure for immigrants and reached a peak at 600, 000 people in 2006. Moreover, the number of emigrants oscillated, it suddenly fell in 2007 but emigrations saw a considerable peak at 420, 000 in 2008.
The chart gives data on immigration, emigration and net
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migration
in UK over a nine
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-
year period from 1999 to 2008.

Overall
, the figure for
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people
who immigrated were much more than that emigrated. Net
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migration
peaked at
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nearly
250, 000 in 2004 and
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nearly
220, 000 in 2007. These were 2 years with the most net migration.

In 1999, more than 450, 000
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people
immigrated, and by 2003, the number had risen to more than 500, 000. Whereas, there was
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nearly
300, 000 in the figure for
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people
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left
UK and
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moved
to another countries and
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only
increased by 181, 000
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people
from 1999 to 2003. Net
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migration
had marginal fluctuation from 170, 000 to 150, 000 between 1999 and 2003.

In 2004, net
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migration
rapidly
rocketed at
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nearly
250, 000
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people
. The number of net
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migration
experienced a slight drop at 240, 000.
Furthermore
, in 2005, 2006, and 2008, the net
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migration
fell
gradually
to 210, 000, 199, 000, and 180, 000,
respectively
. The year 2004 witnessed a sharp upward trend in the figure for immigrants and reached a peak at 600, 000
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people
in 2006.
Moreover
, the number of emigrants oscillated, it
suddenly
fell in 2007
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but
emigrations
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saw
a considerable peak at 420, 000 in 2008.
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