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proportions of companies in terms of social media presence between 2012 and 2016.

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The bar chart illustrates the proportions of companies in terms of social media presence between 2012 and 2016. Overall, during the 4-year period, the percentage of businesses using social media increased noticeably; also, the rate of large enterprises was the highest compared to the remaining types of company. According to the data, small businesses witnessed a gradual increase in the use of social media between 2012 and 2014 from more than 25% to 35%; meanwhile, the figure for medium companies rose sharply with more than 30% in 2012 to nearly 50% in 2014. Both small and medium enterprises decreased significantly in social media presence in 2015 to about 30%, before reaching to peak at nearly 50% and over 50% in 2016 respectively. It can be clearly seen that the percentage of social media involvement of large businesses was the highest out of 3 types of company. The figure for large enterprises maintained at just under 80% except for 2015, when the media presence rate fell considerably to over 50%.
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companies
in terms of
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social
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media
presence between 2012 and 2016.

Overall
, during the 4-year period, the percentage of businesses using
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social
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media
increased
noticeably
;
also
, the rate of large enterprises was the highest compared to the remaining types of
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company
.

According to the data,
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small
businesses witnessed a gradual increase in the
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use
of
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social
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media
between 2012 and 2014 from more than 25% to 35%; meanwhile, the figure for medium
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companies
rose
sharply
with more than 30% in 2012 to
nearly
50% in 2014. Both
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small
and medium enterprises decreased
significantly
in
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social
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media
presence in 2015 to about 30%,
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before
reaching to peak at
nearly
50% and over 50% in 2016
respectively
.

It can be
clearly
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seen
that the percentage of
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social
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media
involvement of large businesses was the highest out of 3 types of
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company
. The figure for large enterprises maintained at
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just
under 80%
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except for
2015, when the
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media
presence rate fell
considerably
to over 50%.
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IELTS academic proportions of companies in terms of social media presence between 2012 and 2016.

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