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the Food production chain

the Food production chain 0nLG5

The diagram illustrates the main steps involved in producing food for everyday consumption. Overall, the process can be divided into six stages, starting at harvesting, and ending with human consumption. First of all, food is grown and harvested on farms. Then, in the second stage, this raw produce is sent to processing plants to be preserved or combined with other ingredients in order to make commercial food products. Following this, the finished goods are transported by road to restaurants or shops. From this point, the food can take one of two paths. If it has been delivered to a restaurant, it is then used in the preparation of meals which are in turn purchased by diners. On the other hand, the food products might be bought from retail outlets, such as supermarkets, by individual consumers, and then used to prepare meals at home. Finally, regardless of whether the food finishes up in restaurants or homes, it is eaten.

The diagram illustrates the main steps involved in producing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 for everyday consumption. Overall
, the process can be divided
 into six stages, starting at harvesting, and ending with human consumption.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
is grown
 and harvested on farms. Then, in the second stage, this raw produce is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to processing plants to be preserved
 or combined with other ingredients in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 commercial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 products. Following this, the finished This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
are transported
 by road to restaurants or shops.

From this point, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 can take one of two paths. If it has been delivered
 to a restaurant, it is then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in the preparation of meals which are in turn This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 by diners. On the other hand
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 products might be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from retail outlets, such as supermarkets, by individual consumers, and then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to prepare meals at home.

Finally
, regardless of whether the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 finishes up in restaurants or homes, it is eaten
. 