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The two charts below show the living arrangements of two different age groups in a certain country in 2015.

The two charts below show the living arrangements of two different age groups in a certain country in 2015. VlRGO
The provided set of charts illustrate how the pupils of two different age groups such as 25-34 and 35-44 dwelled in a certain country in the year 2015. Overall, it is apparent from the pie charts that the equal percentage of folks aged 25-34 and 35-44 preferred to settle alone whereas the large proportion of masses of age 35-44 had lived with partner/spouse as opposed to the people to the people aged 25-34. At first glance, 30% of 25-34 aged people was residing with parents as well as same ratio accouted for those citizens who have lived with roommates. Similarly, it has showed that the equal proportion of people aged 25-34 aboded alone and with their partner/spouse which was 20. Moving to the second diagram, just two quarters of people aged 35-44 were resulted to live with partner/spouse which was more by 40% ratio of people living with parents. On the other hand, it is recorded that same percentage of people had lived alone and with flatmates (20%).
The provided set of charts illustrate how the pupils of two
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age groups such as 25-34 and 35-44
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dwelled
in a certain country in the year 2015.

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aged
25-34 and 35-44 preferred to settle alone whereas the large proportion of masses of age 35-44 had
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lived
with partner/spouse as opposed to the
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people
to the
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people
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aged
25-34.

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first
glance, 30% of 25-34
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aged
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people
was residing with parents
as well
as same ratio
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accouted
for those citizens who have
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lived
with roommates.
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, it has
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showed
that the equal proportion of
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people
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aged
25-34
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aboded
alone and with their partner/spouse which was 20.

Moving to the second diagram,
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two quarters of
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people
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aged
35-44
were resulted
to
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live
with partner/spouse which was more by 40% ratio of
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people
living with parents.
On the other hand
, it
is recorded
that same percentage of
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people
had
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lived
alone and with flatmates (20%).
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IELTS academic The two charts below show the living arrangements of two different age groups in a certain country in 2015.

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