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The bar chart shows the types of media that people of different age groups used to get daily news in one country in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph illustrates different kinds of methods used by people ranged from variations of age groups to keep pace with the news in a country in 2011. Overall, it can be seen easily from the chart that radio was the most popular means of media 4 age groups while the percentage of people using microphone blogging declined steadily among all groups. Moreover the use of social networks was the second common media except its dominance in the teenage group. The vast majority people from the age above 18 years old used radio to get daily new. The figure for those who are teenagers accounts for 40% of the total. In the group between 10 and 17 years old, the use of social networks was 80%, overwhelming that of the 2 others media. However, the number of people used this kind of media decreased sharply as their older ages. Only 10% of those who over 65 years old found social networks useful to get daily news. The similar pattern also seen in the percentage of people using microphone blogging, with the figure for adolescent group accounting for 40% then the use of this type became a minority.
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the types of media that people of different age groups used to get daily news in one country in 2011.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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