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The table illustrates the performance of three different branches of a chain of bakeries in three different locations in London for the year 2015. Overall, it is clear that The Covent Garden branch is the company’s most profitable store, with the highest number of transactions and average transaction value (ATV). St John’s Wood, on the other hand, lags far behind, despite the fact that its ATV is slightly higher than Oxford Circus. It is evident that the best performer is the shop in Covent Garden, which with 642 transactions a day on average has at least 100 more transactions than Oxford Circus and more than double from St John’s Wood. Covent Garden is also ahead in terms of average transaction value, with $7, 58 per transaction compared to Oxford Circus’s $ 4. 15 and St John’s Wood’s $5. 01 On average, eat-in and take-away transactions are almost equal in each store, with take-away transactions edging slightly ahead in two of them. St John Wood is the only exception, with eat-in transactions surpassing take-away by 31. The table also provides us information about the most popular items in each branch, revealing that the shopping habits of customers in each area are widely varied: Covent Garden’s best seller is the croissant, while Oxford Circus’s customers favour lattes, and St John’s Wood’s customer prefer strawberry tarts.
The table illustrates the performance of three
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branches of a chain of bakeries in three
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locations in London for the year 2015.

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Covent
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branch is the
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company
’s most profitable store, with the highest number of
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transactions
and
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average
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value (ATV). St John’s
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Wood
,
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, lags far behind, despite the fact that its ATV is
slightly
higher than
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Oxford
Circus.

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Garden
, which with 642
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transactions
a day on
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average
has at least 100 more
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transactions
than
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Oxford
Circus and more than double from St John’s
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.
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value, with $7, 58 per
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transaction
compared to
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Circus’s
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. 15 and St John’s
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$5. 01

On
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, eat-in and take-away
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transactions
are almost equal in each store, with take-away
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edging
slightly
ahead in two of them. St John
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Wood
is the
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surpassing take-away by 31.

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provides us information about the most popular items in each branch, revealing that the shopping habits of customers in each area are
widely
varied:
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best seller
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Circus’s customers
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lattes, and St John’s
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customer prefer strawberry tarts.
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