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IT and Service Industry GDP Graph

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The above graph presents the GDP rating for the IT and Service industry in the UK, from the year 1992 to 2000. Both the industries have been highlighted with their respective color. There has been an steady increment in the GDP rating for the Service industry from the year 1994 to 2000. Even though this seems the case for IT industry as well, there was a sudden fall in the rating in the year 1996. The highest rating for the IT and Service industry are approximately 14. 9% and 8. 1%, respectively, for the year 2000. The lowest rating for both the IT and Service industries were in the year 1992, approximately 6. 1% and 4% respectively. And every year the GDP rating for the IT industry is higher than that of the Service industry.
The above graph presents the GDP
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for the IT and
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Service
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industry
in the UK, from the
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year
1992 to 2000. Both the
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industries
have
been highlighted
with their respective color. There has been
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an
steady increment in the GDP
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rating
for the
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Service
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industry
from the
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year
1994 to 2000.
Even though
this seems the case for IT
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industry
as well
, there was a sudden fall in the
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rating
in the
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year
1996. The highest
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rating
for the IT and
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Service
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industry
are approximately 14. 9% and 8. 1%,
respectively
, for the
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year
2000. The lowest
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rating
for both the IT and
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Service
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industries
were in the
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year
1992, approximately 6. 1% and 4%
respectively
. And every
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year
the GDP
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rating
for the IT
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industry
is higher than that of the
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Service
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industry
.
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IELTS academic IT and Service Industry GDP Graph

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