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The following table shows average daily water use in household in the USA before and after the application of water efficiency measures

The following table shows average daily water use in household in the USA before and after the application of water efficiency measures MMVVN
The given table depicts usage of water in USA households before and after taking some measures. The data has been calibrated in gallons. To begin with, in the first given year which is 2011 18. 5 gallons of water was utilised by people for toilet purposes, whereas for dishwashers that was only one gallon. After that 15 gallon water was used for washing machines, however for bath that was 1. 2 gallon. Water consumption for shower was 11. 6 gallon but household taps used 10. 9 gallon water. In addition, 9. 5 gallon water utilised by masses of USA for water leaks and rest 1. 64 other uses. Total water was 69. 3 gallons. Moving to 2012, after efficiency measures total water balloon dwindled with 24 gallons and reached at 45. 3. in which 10. 8 gallon used for household taps and 10. 0 for washing machines full stop water usage for toilet decreased with 10 gallon that was 8. 2, now water leaks utilised for gallon water but that was more than double of it for shower uses with 8. 8 gallon. There was not any change for bath and other uses. Dishwasher's water decreased by 0. 3 gallons. Overall, it can be said that water uses fell down for all purposes after taking some measures.
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in USA households
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measures. The data has
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year which is 2011 18.
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5 gallons
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was
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people
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only
one gallon. After that
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15 gallon
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was
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2 gallon
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consumption for shower was 11.
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6 gallon
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household taps
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used
10.
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9 gallon
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5 gallon
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leaks and rest 1. 64 other
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. Total
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was 69.
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3 gallons
. Moving to 2012, after efficiency measures total
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balloon dwindled with
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24 gallons
and reached at 45. 3. in which 10.
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8 gallon
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for household taps and 10. 0 for washing machines full
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usage for toilet decreased with
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10 gallon
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leaks
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that was more than double of it for shower
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8 gallon
. There was not any
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change
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. Dishwasher's
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decreased by 0.
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3 gallons
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IELTS academic The following table shows average daily water use in household in the USA before and after the application of water efficiency measures

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