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the process of changing a tyre of a car

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The illustrated information in the diagram represents the process of changing a tyre of a car when it has been punctured while you are driving on the street. There have been 13 stages shown after the tyre has been broken finding a safe place is the first step. Moreover, what tools are necessary to change the tyre and in the end, take all of the stuff in the car. According to the diagram, after puncturing the tyre on the street, first, find a safe place and turn the hazard lights on. After the jack, the wrench and spare tyre have been brought out of the car, the hub cap should be taken off from the tyre. Following this, loosen the wheel nuts. Then, the car needs to be lifted up by the jack over the 15 cm. After that, the wheel nuts can be removed and the tyre is replaced with the spare tyre. Once the wheel nuts have been tightened but not all the way, the car should be brought down, then continue tightening until all the wheel nuts are tight. The final step is to take all of the tools and stuff from the street and put them in the car, don't leave anything on the street.
The illustrated information in the diagram represents the process of changing a
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tyre
of a
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car
when it has
been punctured
while you are driving on the
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street
. There have been 13 stages shown after the
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tyre
has
been broken
finding a safe place is the
first
step.
Moreover
, what tools are necessary to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the
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tyre
and in the
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end
, take
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all of the
stuff in the
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car
. According to the diagram, after puncturing the
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tyre
on the
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street
,
first
, find a safe place and turn the hazard lights on. After the jack, the wrench and spare
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tyre
have
been brought
out of the
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car
, the
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hub cap
should
be taken
off from the
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tyre
. Following this, loosen the
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wheel
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nuts
. Then, the
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car
needs to be
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lifted up
by the jack over the 15 cm. After that, the
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wheel
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nuts
can
be removed
and the
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tyre
is replaced
with the spare
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tyre
. Once the
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wheel
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nuts
have
been tightened
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but
not all the way, the
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car
should
be brought
down, then continue tightening until all the
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wheel
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nuts
are tight. The final step is to take
Consider using "all the".
all of the
tools and stuff from the
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street
and put them in the
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car
, don't
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leave
anything on the
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street
.
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IELTS academic the process of changing a tyre of a car

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