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The following pie charts and the table show how three countries (the USA, UK and Malaysia) deal with dangerous waste. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The diagrams illustrate that in formation about dealing with dangerous disposal in three countries being placed in three different continents. What stands out is that the waste Produced in the USA is the highest among the mentioned countries. As regards pie charts, it is worth mentioning that in both UK and Malaysia the disposed propulsion 45% is the same and the most while in USA it has 20% off the whole dangerous waste. The landfill waste in UK is reported 15% and For Malaysia it is doubled. This aspect has the most proportion in USA; exactly half of the ways in this country is categorized as landfill. Recycling the waste, UK is most successful country with 40% following by USA in Malaysia with 30 person and 25% respectively. The table shows how this dangerous waste produced. In all of these countries, it is the plastic bags that are reported as the most produced category, USA with 60MT, Malaysia and UK with 50 and 32MT in turn. The least produced category in both USA in Malaysia is electronica waste with 14 and 7MT, albeit in UK it is the clinical waist with 9MT being the least produced.
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disposal in three
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in the USA is the highest among the mentioned countries.

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in USA
it has 20% off the whole
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waste
. The landfill
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in UK
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. This aspect has the most proportion
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in USA
; exactly half of the ways in this
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country
is categorized
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, UK is
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successful
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with 40% following
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by USA
in Malaysia with 30 person and 25%
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The table
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, it is the plastic bags that
are reported
as the most
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category, USA with 60MT, Malaysia and UK with 50 and 32MT in turn. The least
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category in both USA in Malaysia is electronica
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with 14 and 7MT, albeit in UK it is the clinical waist with 9MT being the least
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IELTS academic The following pie charts and the table show how three countries (the USA, UK and Malaysia) deal with dangerous waste. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

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