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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The given chart and table illustrate the previous, recent and future numbers of population in Japan from 1950 to 2055. Overall, although it is clear that the Japanese nation is rapidly increasing, the predictors think that this booming in Japan's population will reduce in the near future. crystal clear, the numbers of population aged 65 years or over didn't exceed 5% in 1950 while there were approximately 84 million Japanese. In comparison, we can notice that the Japanese became healthier and the ration for population aged 65 years or over became 20% of the population which was more than 127 million in 2005. Similarly, the rate of population was somehow fixed between 2005 and 2015. in the other hand, the aged 65 or over population increased to reach 34% of the whole population numbers. on the other side, predictors found that by 2055 not only the population for japan will cut down to 89 million again as in 1950th but also the aged 65 or over population will be near to the half of the Japanese population numbers.
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chart and table illustrate the previous, recent and future numbers of
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population
in Japan from 1950 to 2055.

Overall
, although it is
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clear
that the Japanese nation is
rapidly
increasing, the predictors
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think
that this booming in Japan's
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population
will
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reduce
in the near future.

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crystal
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clear
, the numbers of
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population
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aged
65 years or
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over
didn't exceed 5% in 1950 while there were approximately 84 million Japanese.

In comparison
, we can notice that the Japanese became healthier and the ration for
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population
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aged
65 years or
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over
became 20% of the
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population
which was more than 127 million in 2005.

Similarly
, the rate of
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population
was somehow
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fixed
between 2005 and 2015.
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in
the other hand, the
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aged
65 or
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over
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population
increased to reach 34% of the whole
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population
numbers.

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on
the other side, predictors found that by 2055 not
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the
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population
for
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japan
will
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cut
down to 89 million again as in 1950th
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but
also
the
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aged
65 or
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over
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population
will be near to the half of the Japanese
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population
numbers.
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IELTS academic The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.

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178 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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