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The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000.

The line graph provides information about contribution as percentage of India's GDP between 1960 and 2000 Overall, there was a significant change in all of GDP, at the beginning of the period Agriculture was a highest percentage. , but dropped gradually a decade by decade. By contrast, Services of GDP increased slowly at the end of the period. It is essential to note that in 1960, Agriculture was a peack of alomost three fifths of gross domestic production. on the campary, by 2000 it decreased in somewhere in vicinity in slighly more one in ten percent. By contrast, Services of the GDP was lower, with 15%. However, between 1980 and 2000. it rose up from 28% to almost 65 %. it can bee seen that, Industry grew marginally from less that a fifth percent in 1960 to exactly a quarter in 1980 then remained static for the next two decades,

The line graph provides information about contribution as percentage of India's GDP between 1960 and 2000

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