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The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram represents the process of electricity generated in a hydroelectric power station through flow of water accompanied with water reservoirs and dam in order for the functioning of it, furthermore, divided operations on the basis of day and night. During the day, the water stored in high-level reservoir from river is stored which is flowed through an opening of dam to tunnel, therefore generating electricity. The water entering the power station involves the process of reversible turbines in generator, thus producing electricity through power lines and then finally to national grid. At the end, storing the water after the process in low-level reservoir. Apparently, the process is reversed at night, pumping the water back to high-level reservoir followed through reversible turbines, tunnel and from the back of the dam while its closed, hence, storing water in high-level reservoir in order to maintain effective operations to be followed during the day. The power station during the day maintains the generation and flow of electricity using maximum energy in contrast to which the water is stored back in the high-level reservoir at night to ensure proper functioning the following day.
The diagram represents the
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of
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electricity
generated in a hydroelectric
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power
station
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through
flow of
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water
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accompanied with
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water
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reservoirs
and dam in order for the functioning of it,
furthermore
, divided operations on the basis of day and night.

During the day, the
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water
stored in
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high-level
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reservoir
from river
is stored
which
is flowed
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through
an opening of dam to tunnel,
therefore
generating
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electricity
. The
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water
entering the
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power
station involves the
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process
of reversible turbines in generator,
thus
producing
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electricity
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through
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power
lines and then
finally
to national grid. At the
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, storing the
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after the
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in low-level reservoir.

Apparently
, the
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process
is reversed
at night, pumping the
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water
back to
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high-level
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reservoir
followed
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through
reversible turbines, tunnel and from the back of the dam while its closed,
hence
, storing
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water
in
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high-level
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reservoir
in order to maintain effective operations to
be followed
during the day.

The
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power
station during the day maintains the generation and flow of
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electricity
using maximum energy
in contrast
to which the
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water
is stored
back in the
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high-level
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reservoir
at night to ensure proper functioning the following day.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

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