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the following maps shows the changes that have takrn place in sydney international airpot since 1930

the following maps shows the changes that have takrn place in sydney international airpot since 1930 o27D
the rendered maps delineate the transformation that have been occured in sydney international Airport over the period of 90 years. Overall, since 1930 the area of sydney Airport witnessed drastic changes especially in the field of runway and car park. In 1930, in the center of the airport, there was a terminal where the road to the sdyney was running in the upward side. Next to the terminal, a runway was located on the bottom of the map. to the north a river was flowing. From the second map it is clear that new two more runways has been constructed above the the Boston Bay. A car park to the nortb has been built. Next to it, there is a hostel. In the north east corner, there is also a one more carpark which is quite near to the domestic terminal. Between the international terminal and domestic terminal, a runway 1 has been constructed.
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rendered maps delineate the transformation that have been
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occured
in
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sydney
international Airport over the period of 90 years.
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, since 1930 the area of
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sydney
Airport witnessed drastic
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changes
especially
in the field of
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runway
and car park. In 1930, in the center of the airport, there was a
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terminal
where the road to the
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sdyney
was running in the upward side.
Next
to the
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terminal
, a
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runway
was located
on the bottom of the map.
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to
the north a river was flowing. From the second map it is
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clear
that new two more
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runways
has
been constructed
above
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the the
Boston Bay. A car park to the
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nortb
has
been built
.
Next
to it, there is a hostel. In the
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north east
corner, there is
also
a one more
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carpark
which is quite near to the domestic
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terminal
. Between the international
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terminal
and domestic
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terminal
, a
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runway
1 has
been constructed
.

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