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The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education. DAeo
The chart is a graphical representation of the number of girls per 100 boys who received education in developed and developing countries in the year 1990 and 1998. The school education is a three-level consisting of primary education, secondary education and tertiary education. The number of girls obtaining primary education in developed countries is seen to be more compared to the ones in evolving countries though the difference is not much of significance. The situation is similar at the secondary education level too, where the volume of girls was reported to above 90 per 100 boys in both the year as compared to be around 80 per 100 boys for developing countries. Overall, the most significant difference is documented at the tertiary education level where the number of girls receiving education was above 100 in the developed countries, while the amount barely reached 75 in the developing ones.
The chart is a graphical representation of the number of
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girls
per 100 boys who received
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education
in developed and developing
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countries
in the year 1990 and 1998. The school
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education
is a three-level consisting of primary
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education
, secondary
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education
and tertiary education.

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The
number of
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girls
obtaining primary
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education
in developed
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countries
is
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seen
to be more compared to the ones in evolving
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countries
though the difference is not much of significance.

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The
situation is similar at the secondary
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education
level too, where the volume of
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girls
was reported
to above 90 per 100 boys in both the year as compared to be around 80 per 100 boys for
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developing countries
.

Overall
, the most significant difference
is documented
at the tertiary
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education
level where the number of
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girls
receiving
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education
was above 100 in the developed
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countries
, while the amount
barely
reached 75 in the developing ones.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education.

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4 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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