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The following maps show the changes that have taken place in the centre of a town since 1700.

The diagram above demonstrates the maps of a downtown in the year of 1700 and today. According to the maps, the hotel in the central portion is expanded, while Market square and church in its vicinity remained untouched. Additionally, all of the streets are upgraded, which led to the removal of Steggle farm. However, the bridge on the northwest of the city is not changed. Also the pattern of the shops and house location is evelutionized and turned into a series of parallel houses and shops in south. In the northern part of the city, the Goode farm is vanished and an extensive car parking lot as well as a couple of houses are constructed. Furthermore, it should be considered that the position of stables next to the St. Peter's lane is flattened and a bunch of houses are constructed. As a final point, a pedestrian cross line in market street alongside with a roundabout in high street are designed following the extension of the roads.
The diagram above demonstrates the maps of a downtown in the year of 1700 and
today
. According to the maps, the hotel in the central portion
is expanded
, while Market square and church in its vicinity remained untouched.

Additionally
,
all of the
streets
are upgraded
, which led to the removal of
Steggle
farm.
However
, the bridge on the northwest of the city is not
changed
.
Also
the pattern of the shops and
house
location is
evelutionized
and turned into a series of parallel
houses
and shops in south.

In the northern part of the city, the Goode farm
is vanished
and an extensive car parking lot
as well
as a couple of
houses
are constructed
.
Furthermore
, it should
be considered
that the position of stables
next
to the St. Peter's lane
is flattened
and a bunch of
houses
are constructed
.

As a final point, a pedestrian cross line in market street alongside with a roundabout in high street
are designed
following the extension of the roads.
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IELTS academic The following maps show the changes that have taken place in the centre of a town since 1700.

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6.0
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