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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table shows percentages of consumer expenditure for three categories of products and services in five countries in 2002. It is clear that the largest proportion of consumer spending in each country went on food, drinks and tobacco. On the other hand, the leisure/education category has the lowest percentages in the table. Out of the five countries, consumer spending on food, drinks and tobacco was noticeably higher in Turkey, at 32. 14%, and Ireland, at nearly 29%. The proportion of spending on leisure and education was also highest in Turkey, at 4. 35%, while expenditure on clothing and footwear was significantly higher in Italy, at 9%, than in any of the other countries. It can be seen that Sweden had the lowest percentages of national consumer expenditure for food/drinks/tobacco and for clothing/footwear, at nearly 16% and just over 5% respectively. Spain had slightly higher figures for these categories, but the lowest figure for leisure/education, at only 1. 98%.
The table
shows
percentages of
consumer
expenditure for three categories of products and services in five countries in 2002.

It is
clear
that the largest proportion of
consumer
spending in each country went on food, drinks and tobacco.
On the other hand
, the leisure/education category has the lowest percentages in the table.

Out of the five countries,
consumer
spending on food, drinks and tobacco was
noticeably
higher in Turkey, at 32. 14%, and Ireland, at
nearly
29%. The proportion of spending on leisure and education was
also
highest in Turkey, at 4. 35%, while expenditure on clothing and footwear was
significantly
higher in Italy, at 9%, than in any of the other countries.

It can be
seen
that Sweden had the lowest percentages of national
consumer
expenditure for food/drinks/tobacco and for clothing/footwear, at
nearly
16% and
just
over 5%
respectively
. Spain had
slightly
higher figures for these categories,
but
the lowest figure for leisure/education, at
only
1. 98%.
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IELTS academic The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

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