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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

The line graph illustrates the number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. Overall, The total number of tourists visited a Caribbean island, which includes visitors staying on cruise ships and stay on the island, rise over the period. While visitors staying on island experience an increase of volume, but it remained constant all throughout. In 2010, There are a total of 1 million visitors in the Caribbean island. It increases to 250, 000 in 2011 and 2012. Then, In 2013, it reached 2 million total visitors visited the Caribbean island with an increase of 500, 000 from 2012. It continues to increase by half a million in the following year, 2014, with a total of 2. 5 million. In 2015, an increase of quarter of a milliion visited the island and remained steady unitl 2016. Then, In 2017, there’s a sudden peak of about three quarter of a million from 2016, with a total of 3. 5 million visitors visited the island. Meanwhile, visitors staying on cruise ships rise to 500, 000 in 2011 from 250, 000 in 2010, and fluctuated until 2013. In 2014, it reach 1 million visitors, a half a million increase from 2013 and continue to increase the following year. Then, In 2016, it rise to 1. 5 million with an increase of 250, 000 from previous year and reaching 2 million in 2017. In 2010 and 2011, 750, 000 visitors stay on the island and gradually increase to 1. 5 million in 2013. It remained constant throughout the period with a slight decrease in 2016, and able to recover back in 2017.
The line graph illustrates the number of tourists visiting a Caribbean
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island
from 2010 to 2017.

Overall
, The
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total
number of tourists
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visited
a Caribbean
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island
, which includes
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visitors
staying on cruise ships and stay on the
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island
, rise over the period. While
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visitors
staying on
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island
experience an
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increase
of volume,
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but
it remained constant all throughout.

In 2010, There are a
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total
of 1
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million
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visitors
in the Caribbean
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island
. It
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increases
to 250, 000 in 2011 and 2012. Then, In 2013, it reached 2
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million
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total
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visitors
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visited
the Caribbean
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island
with an
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increase
of 500, 000 from 2012. It continues to
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increase
by half a
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million
in the following year, 2014, with a
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total
of 2. 5
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million
. In 2015, an
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increase
of quarter of a
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milliion
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visited
the
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and remained steady
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unitl
2016. Then, In 2017, there’s a sudden peak of about
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three quarter
of a
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million
from 2016, with a
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total
of 3. 5
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million
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visitors
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visited
the
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. Meanwhile,
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staying on cruise ships rise to 500, 000 in 2011 from 250, 000 in 2010, and fluctuated until 2013. In 2014, it
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reach
1
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million
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, a half a
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million
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increase
from 2013 and continue to
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the following year. Then, In 2016, it
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rise
to 1. 5
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million
with an
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of 250, 000 from previous year and reaching 2
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million
in 2017.

In 2010 and 2011, 750, 000
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stay on the
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and
gradually
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to 1. 5
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in 2013. It remained constant throughout the period with a slight decrease in 2016, and able to recover back in 2017.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

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