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The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five australian cities.

The bar chart illustrates the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in last 4 weeks in 5 australian cities. Overall, Most city residents went to a café for their coffee or tea in last 4 weeks, and it increased by twice as much of those who bought fresh coffee. While, Instant coffee continue to increase in some cities. In Sydney, Around 44% of residents bought fresh coffee, higher than Melbourne. It continue to decline to almost 35% in Brisbane and remained steady in Adelaide, But then it rise to about 37% in Hobart. People who bought instant coffee is more than 45% in Sydney and increase to about 47% in Melbourne. Then, continue to increase in Brisbane. However, it decreases to 50% in Adelaide which it stayed almost the same with residents that went to a café of coffee or tea, then increase to approximately 54% in Hobart. Over 60% of resident in Sydney went to a café for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks, with about 3% increase in Melbourne. However, it decreases to about 55% in Brisbane, and continue to drop just below 50% in Adelaide, then rise to about 63% in Hobart.
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In Sydney, Around 44% of
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Over 60% of
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below 50% in Adelaide, then rise to about 63% in Hobart.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five australian cities.

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203 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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