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The following maps show the changes that have taken place in Sydney international airport since 1930 and today.

The following maps show the changes that have taken place in Sydney international airport since 1930 and today. DllVm
The maps illustrate the past and current developments which have taken place in a particular international airport. In 1930, the terminal had been situated in the center, whereas the area of terminal is expanded in these days. Besides this, runway was located in the behind of terminal, it is separated in two parts in present. Furthermore, the space which was not utilized in 1930. After that, this place is used for domestic terminal and car park, and runway -2and runway-3: is located in the south area.
The maps illustrate the past and
current
developments which have taken place in a particular international airport.

In 1930, the
terminal
had
been situated
in the center, whereas the area of
terminal
is expanded
in these days.
Besides
this, runway
was located
in the behind of
terminal
, it
is separated
in two parts in present.
Furthermore
, the space which was not utilized in 1930. After that, this place is
used
for domestic
terminal
and car park, and runway -2and runway-3:
is located
in the south area.
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IELTS academic The following maps show the changes that have taken place in Sydney international airport since 1930 and today.

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