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The following maps show the changes that have taken place in Sydney international airport since 1930 and today.

The following maps show the changes that have taken place in Sydney international airport since 1930 and today. DllVm

The maps illustrate the past and current developments which have taken place in a particular international airport. In 1930, the terminal had been situated in the center, whereas the area of terminal is expanded in these days. Besides this, runway was located in the behind of terminal, it is separated in two parts in present. Furthermore, the space which was not utilized in 1930. After that, this place is used for domestic terminal and car park, and runway -2and runway-3: is located in the south area.

The maps illustrate the past and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 developments which have taken place in a particular international airport.

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 in the center, whereas the area of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlethalfatalincurable
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, it is separated
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IELTS academic The following maps show the changes that have taken place in Sydney international airport since 1930 and today.

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