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Reasons for most recent arrest in percentage.

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The given bar graph illustrates the information about the proportion of both sexes have to sent in a prison by police due to some specific reason. Having a cursory glass that males were arrested more than females and public drinking was the most common reason for throwing in the jail. Turning to detail, percentage of both gender were in arrestication who don't have any answer about under the 7%, it has the maximum on public drinking.
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bar graph illustrates the information about the proportion of both sexes
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more than females and public drinking was the most common reason for throwing in the jail. Turning to detail, percentage of both gender were in
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who don't have any answer about under the 7%, it has the maximum on public drinking.

IELTS academic Reasons for most recent arrest in percentage.

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