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The two maps show the main changes which have taken place in the town of Kimsville between the year 2002 and today.

The two maps show the main changes which have taken place in the town of Kimsville between the year 2002 and today. gDxW1
The two maps show the main changes which have taken place in the town of Kimsville between the year 2002 and today. In general, it appears that Kimsville has become much more modern city, with far more entertainments, transport facilities and working places. One interesting change is that a forest, that was located in a North-East direction from the centre, has been cut down, and the new apartments have been built on its place. Another striking change is that in 2002, city hadn’t had any transport facilities, yet new train station has been build in the west part of Kimsville. Also, it is important to note that instead of another forest in South-West, a brand new football stadium has been built. An old cinema has been transformed into a pub, were people can enjoy their time. A final interesting development has been the demolishing of the factory, so the new software company has been introduced to the East of the city.
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between the year 2002 and
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has become much more modern city, with far more entertainments, transport facilities and working places.

One interesting
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is that a forest, that
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in a North-East direction from the
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apartments have
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change
is that in 2002, city hadn’t had any transport facilities,
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train station has been build in the west part of
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Kimsville
.
Also
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football stadium has
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cinema has
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can enjoy their time. A final interesting development has been the demolishing of the factory,
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software
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IELTS academic The two maps show the main changes which have taken place in the town of Kimsville between the year 2002 and today.

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