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The following diagram displays the process of producing drinking water using solar power.

The following diagram displays the process of producing drinking water using solar power. 9B8Wn
The following diagram displays the process of producing drinking water using solar power. There are six main stages in the process, beginning with absorbing solar power and ending with pouring drinking water into a movable container. Firstly, all the solar power that is absorbed with a solar conductor turn into electrical energy which is transferred into a pumping device then by using that electric energy turn on the pumping machine and pumped the water into a particular way that goes in water filter in water filter, in this stage the water is cleaned and freed from all dirt and smoke and become as fresh and drinkable water. Next, drinkable water is poured into a huge water tanker that is set above a wooden platform. In the final step, the tap which does not allow the water to come out is removed and then all of that drinkable water is collected in a movable container.
The following diagram displays the process of producing drinking
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using
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solar
power.

There are six main stages in the process, beginning with absorbing
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solar
power and ending with pouring drinking
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water
into a movable container.

Firstly
, all the
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solar
power that
is absorbed
with a
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solar
conductor turn into electrical energy which
is transferred
into a pumping device then by using that electric energy turn on the pumping machine and pumped the
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water
into a particular way that goes in
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water
filter in
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water
filter, in this stage the
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water
is cleaned
and freed from all dirt and smoke and become as fresh and drinkable
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water
.
Next
, drinkable
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water
is poured
into a huge
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water
tanker that
is set
above a wooden platform. In the final step, the tap which does not
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allow
the
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water
to
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come
out
is removed
and then all of that drinkable
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water
is collected
in a movable container.
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IELTS academic The following diagram displays the process of producing drinking water using solar power.

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154 words
6.5
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