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The chart provides information regarding the proportion of males and females that utilized internet for various purposes in 2001 in the UK.

The chart provides information regarding the proportion of males and females that utilized internet for various purposes in 2001 in the UK. Arb91

Overall, almost all respondents to the survey mentioned the usage of Email, while figures for most other categories are less than half of it. Similarities in figures between males and females were observed in the usage of internet to access Email, banking and selling goods online. Meanwhile Email was mostly used service for both genders being close to 100%, the index of commercial(vendor) was 5 times as less. Turning to Banking, two fifth of males and females in the UK preferred online Banking in 2001. When it comes to other categories in the graph, there were noticeable difference among males and females. In comparison with men, 20% more women chose medical research and online shopping, equaling to 40% and 60% respectively. In online games, on the other hand, male dominance was visible with 40% of them choosing it.

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