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How to make electric energy for home use.

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The chart shows the six-step process of generating electricity for our home by ourselves using some machines and tools. The first step begins by planting a 3/4 steel tank under the soil. Then to produce methane gas add leaves, food, scrap and water to it. So it will be fermented after some time and methane gas will be created. And Methane gas will now move toward storage via pipes where whole methane gas will be stored. Moreover, stored methane gas will now move toward the compressor where gas will be compressed and it will be forwarded to the combustion engine where compressed gas will be converted to Mechanical energy and now mechanical energy will be forwarded to the generator where electrical energy will be made by using mechanical energy. Finally, Generator will produce electricity and then it will be stored in a battery and now it is possible to use the stored power for home use.
The chart
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the six-step process of generating electricity for our home by ourselves using
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machines and tools.

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by planting a 3/4 steel tank under the soil. Then to produce methane
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gas
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add
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leaves
, food, scrap and water to it.
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it will
be fermented
after
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time and methane
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. And Methane
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toward storage via pipes where whole methane
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.
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, stored methane
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gas
will
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now
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move
toward the compressor where
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gas
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be compressed
and it will
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to the combustion engine where compressed
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gas
will
be converted
to Mechanical energy and
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mechanical energy will
be forwarded
to the generator where electrical energy will
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by using mechanical energy.

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, Generator will produce electricity and then it will
be stored
in a battery and
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it is possible to
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the stored power for home
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IELTS academic How to make electric energy for home use.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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