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How to make home energy on our own.

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The chart shows the six-step process of generating electricity for our home by ourselves using some machines and tools. The first step begins by planting a 3/4 steel tank under the soil. Then to produce methane gas add leaves, food, scrap and water to it. So it will be fermented after some time and methane gas will be created. and Methane gas will now move toward storage via pipes where whole methane gas will be stored. Moreover, stored methane gas will now move toward the compressor where gas will be compressed and it will be forwarded to the combustion engine where compressed gas will be converted to Mechanical energy and now mechanical energy will be forwarded to the generator where electrical energy will be made by using mechanical energy. Finally, Generator will produce electricity and then it will be stored in a battery and now it is possible to use the stored power for home use.

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