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amount of people, separated by genders, in further education in Britain during three different periods

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The line chart illustrates the amount of people, separated by genders, in further education in Britain during three different periods of time and split between full-time students and part-time students. The first point we can observe is that, regardless of gender, there has been an increase in the number of full-time students over the years. Secondly, the chart shows us that during that period, male students in part-time education have considerably increased in number, more specifically by 100 thousand. However, between 1980/81 and 1990/91 only a slight increase occurred from 850 thousand part-time students to 900 thousand part-time students. In contrast, when we look at women in part-time education, one can see the opposite trend demonstrated. During the same period, there was a big increase in the number of women in part-time further education of about 350 thousand. All in all, one can conclude that there was an increase in the number of women in both full-time and part-time education which means that they started to be the predominant gender with further education.

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