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The line graph shows the number of families moving to various dwellings between 2000 and 2012 and bar chart illustrates households dwelling in different types of buildings in Finland

The line graph shows the number of families moving to various dwellings between 2000 and 2012 and bar chart illustrates households dwelling in different types of buildings in Finland a7Pnm

The line graph gives information about the rate of families moving to different types of dwellings from 2000 to 2012 and the bar chart compares households living in various types of buildings in Finland. It is clear from the first graph that the percentage of families moving to studio areas witnessed a significant increase over the period shown, while two other remaining habitats had considerable drops. Turning to the bar chart, detached houses were popular among villagers along with terraced houses that were used mostly in urban areas. To commence with describing the line graph, in 2000, railroad areas constituted the highest percentage of dwellers, at 1, 5% and this was dramatically outstanding such areas as duplex and studio 1, 1% and 1, 3% respectively. Surprisingly, the category of studio rocketed by the end of the period, at just under 2%. Meanwhile, two quite similar downward trends were recorded in the areas of duplex and railroad, at 0, 1% for the former and 0, 5% for the latter. With regards to the bar graph, rural area dwellers preferred to live more in detached houses whereas in cities people would rather choose terraced houses. Neither apartment blocks nor other types of accommodations showed noticeable figures worth mentioning.

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 types of dwellings from 2000 to 2012 and the bar chart compares households living in various types of buildings in Finland.

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clear
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 witnessed a significant increase over the period shown, while two other remaining habitats had considerable drops. Turning to the bar chart, detached You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
houses
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houses
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used
mostly
 in urban areas.

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graph
, in 2000, railroad You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
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 constituted the highest percentage of dwellers, at 1, 5% and this was dramatically
 outstanding such You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 as duplex and studio 1, 1% and 1, 3% respectively
. Surprisingly
, the category of studio rocketed by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
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 of the period, at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
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areas
 of duplex and railroad, at 0, 1% for the former and 0, 5% for the latter.

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, rural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
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 dwellers preferred to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
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 more in detached You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
houses
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 noticeable figures worth mentioning. 