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The following charts provide information about the percentage of population who rode bicycles in one town by different age groups in 2012.

The following charts provide information about the percentage of population who rode bicycles in one town by different age groups in 2012. 55Dnm
The supplied table chart illustrates the information about the proportion of that people who rode bicycles within one town of different age groups in year 2012. To begin with, the proportion of female of age group (0-9) who rode bicycles was 52. 5% whereas it is reported that 51. 2% males rode bicycles of same age group. In 10-19 age group, 25. 1% males rode bicycles whose proportion was 18. 5% smaller than the proportion of females of that group. Probing further, 18. 2% females rode bicycles of age group (20- 39) which was 1. 6% smaller from the percentage of females of 60 plus and 4. 5% greater from the proportion of females of 40 to 59 age. Moreover, 10. 8%, 9. 3%, 14. 6% male rode bicycles of age group 20 - 39, 40 - 59 and above 60 respectively. Overall, it is evident that the maximum proportion was of males who rode bicycles whereas percentage of females was less. The maximum proportion was from 0 to 9 age group whereas minimum was from 40 to 59 age group.
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IELTS academic The following charts provide information about the percentage of population who rode bicycles in one town by different age groups in 2012.

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