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The following chart shows the use of fossil fuels and electricity in in UK and Sweden in 2013 and 2015.

The following chart shows the use of fossil fuels and electricity in in UK and Sweden in 2013 and 2015. p15Vy
The tabular data illustrates the consumption of fassil fuel and electricity in sweden and United Kingdom in a span of two years (2013-2015). To begin with, the United kingdom consumed the highest proportion of fossil fuels which accounted for 2013. However, after two years the consumption of fossil fuels decreased of 3%. Meanwhile, the Sweden consumed lowest proportion of 34% in 2013 but, similar decline witnessed in Sweden as United Kingdom in 2015. Probling further, 14, 924 kwh electricity was used by Sweden in 2013 which was dewindled by almost 700 kish electricity. Similarly, the use of electricity in United Kingdom falled from 570/ kwh to 5452 khw. overall, it is vivid that the use of fossil fuel followed opposite trend as compared to comsumption of electricity time in a given time period.
The tabular data illustrates the consumption of
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fuel
and
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electricity
in
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sweden
and
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United
Kingdom in a span of two years (2013-2015). To
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United kingdom
consumed the highest proportion of fossil
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fuels
which accounted for 2013.
However
, after two years the consumption of fossil
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fuels
decreased of 3%. Meanwhile, the Sweden consumed
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lowest
proportion of 34% in 2013
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, similar decline witnessed in Sweden as
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United
Kingdom in 2015.
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Probling
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, 14, 924
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kwh
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electricity
was
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used
by Sweden in 2013 which was
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dewindled
by almost 700
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kish
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electricity
.
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, the
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use
of
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electricity
in
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United
Kingdom
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falled
from 570/
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kwh
to 5452
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khw
.
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overall
, it is vivid that the
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use
of fossil
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fuel
followed opposite trend as compared to
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comsumption
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electricity
time in a
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IELTS academic The following chart shows the use of fossil fuels and electricity in in UK and Sweden in 2013 and 2015.

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