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The diagram is a plan; which depicts the centre of a small town is called Islip which is going to be developed from present to future.

The diagram is a plan; which depicts the centre of a small town is called Islip which is going to be developed from present to future. 0l6l9
The diagram is a plan; which depicts the centre of a small town is called Islip which is going to be developed from present to future. Overall, the major changes can be seen easily that, the dual carriageway is going to surround the entire centre of the town and no main road which goes through the centre of the town. The main road will be replaced with the road where pedestrians only going to be allowed. There are two shops on the north and south of both parallel sides of the main roads, but in the future, the northern shop going to be replaced with a bus station, shopping centre, car park and new housing. A new dual carriageway is going to construct; which surrounds the entire town centre. The southern shops of pedestrians road; there new housing will be created: where housing and park on the west and east of new housing will be established.
The diagram is a plan; which depicts the
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centre
of a
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small
town
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Islip
which is going to
be developed
from present to future.

Overall
, the major
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changes
can be
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seen
easily
that, the dual carriageway is going to surround the entire
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centre
of the town and no main
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road
which goes through the
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centre
of the town.

The main
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road
will
be replaced
with the
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road
where pedestrians
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only
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allowed
. There are two shops on the north and south of both parallel sides of the main
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roads
,
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but
in the future, the northern shop going to
be replaced
with a bus station, shopping
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centre
, car park and
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new
housing.

A
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new
dual carriageway is going to construct; which surrounds the entire town
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centre
. The southern shops of pedestrians
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road
; there
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new
housing will
be created
: where housing and park on the west and east of
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housing will
be established
.
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IELTS academic The diagram is a plan; which depicts the centre of a small town is called Islip which is going to be developed from present to future.

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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