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the bar chart shows the number of students studying six main subjects at a US university in 2010

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The bar chart compares and contrasts data on the differences in the number of male and female students learning six major subjects at a US university in 2010. An overview of the bar chart reveals that the total number of leaners in Finance was highest among genders while the reverse was true for Engineering. With regard to the learners of females studying Finance, it was 230 students, which was as high as that of males. In stark contrast, the number of female learners studying Engineering was 55 students, compares to 57 students for males. In terms of Marketing, the number of females was 120 students, whereas the figure for males was lower, at 80 students. Meanwhile, regarding the female learners in Accounting was higher than that of males, at 200 and 170 students, respectively. The figure for females in Economics was 75 students, which was twice as low as that of males. In comparison with the female learners studying in Mathematics (60 students), the figure for males was significantly higher, at 200 students.
The bar chart compares and contrasts data on the differences in the
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learning six major subjects at a US university in 2010.

An overview of the bar chart reveals that the total
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leaners
in Finance was highest among genders while the reverse was true for Engineering.

With regard to the
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learners
of
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females
studying Finance, it was 230
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students
, which was as high as that of
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males
. In stark contrast, the
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number
of
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female
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learners
studying Engineering was 55
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students
, compares to 57
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students
for males.

In terms of Marketing, the
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number
of
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females
was 120
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students
, whereas the figure for
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males
was lower, at 80
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students
. Meanwhile, regarding the
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female
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learners
in Accounting was higher than that of
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males
, at 200 and 170
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students
,
respectively
. The figure for
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females
in Economics was 75
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students
, which was twice as low as that of
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males
.
In comparison
with the
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female
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learners
studying in Mathematics (60
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students)
, the figure for
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males
was
significantly
higher, at 200
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students
.
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