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The chart is a bar graph, which depicts the various age group of Australian men and women; who do regular physical workout in 2010.

The chart is a bar graph, which depicts the various age group of Australian men and women; who do regular physical workout in 2010. qR5LP
The chart is a bar graph, which depicts the various age group of Australian men and women; who do regular physical workout in 2010. Overall, it can easily be observed that the Men's percentage on constant decline till a certain age group and women's percentage on constant increase till a certain age group. From the 15 to 24 age group, 52. 8% was the highest in terms of physical exercise in comparison of the women that was 47. 7%. After that, there was a constant rise of women in different age groups till 45 to 54 age range, but after that, there was the condition where age group from 45 to 54 and 55 to 64; moreover the decrease in the women physical activity with the difference of 0. 3%. The % of men's exercise on a regular dip, but the conditions changed only on the 45 to 54 age group; were their % again on a constant rise. on the contrary, the female's % on a decline from 53. 3% to 53% to 47. 1%. 65 and above age group was the place, where both men and women' workout % had the least difference that was 0. 4% than the other age groups.
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; who do regular physical workout in 2010.

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From the 15 to 24
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, 52. 8% was the highest in terms of physical exercise
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that was 47. 7%. After that, there was a
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from 45 to 54 and 55 to 64;
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physical activity with the difference of 0. 3%.

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was the place, where both
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IELTS academic The chart is a bar graph, which depicts the various age group of Australian men and women; who do regular physical workout in 2010.

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