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The line graph illustrates the trend of watching television and radio with respect to the percentage of British audience throughout a typical day in December 1992. Overall, peak of viewers is observed in early morning and evening for both radio and television. Initially, around 8% of the total population starts their day with radio. Then a significant increase in its users is depicted in graph at approximately 8 a. m. with a peak of about 28%. This peak is followed by a declining pattern with slight fluctuations in evening and maintains its initial value again at 6 a. m. Case of television is typically different from radio, as no one starts their day with T. V. Just after 6 a. m. the total number of viewers watching television starts growing gradually and surpasses the value of radio users at around 1 p. m. Then, this patterns experiences fluctuation around 4 p. m. which is followed by a rapid increment. Consequently, it hits a peak of approximately 48% consumers at 8 p. m. Then, total number of users declines quickly, hitting a trough of around 2% at 3 a. m. Then, Total number of viewers increases slightly at 5 a. m. In conclusion, viewers of television peaked up in the evening at around 8 p. m. Whereas radio consumers are significant at the start of their day. Consumers of both radio and T. V became exactly equal at 3 a. m.

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In conclusion
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around
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 consumers are significant at the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoutsetdawnkickoffopening
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 and T. V became exactly equal at 3 a. m. 