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The line graph illustrates the trend of watching television and radio with respect to the percentage of British audience throughout a typical day in December 1992. Overall, peak of viewers is observed in early morning and evening for both radio and television. Initially, around 8% of the total population starts their day with radio. Then a significant increase in its users is depicted in graph at approximately 8 a. m. with a peak of about 28%. This peak is followed by a declining pattern with slight fluctuations in evening and maintains its initial value again at 6 a. m. Case of television is typically different from radio, as no one starts their day with T. V. Just after 6 a. m. the total number of viewers watching television starts growing gradually and surpasses the value of radio users at around 1 p. m. Then, this patterns experiences fluctuation around 4 p. m. which is followed by a rapid increment. Consequently, it hits a peak of approximately 48% consumers at 8 p. m. Then, total number of users declines quickly, hitting a trough of around 2% at 3 a. m. Then, Total number of viewers increases slightly at 5 a. m. In conclusion, viewers of television peaked up in the evening at around 8 p. m. Whereas radio consumers are significant at the start of their day. Consumers of both radio and T. V became exactly equal at 3 a. m.
The line graph illustrates the trend of watching
television
and
radio
with respect to the percentage of British audience throughout a typical day in December 1992.
Overall
,
peak
of
viewers
is observed
in early morning and evening for both
radio
and television.

Initially
,
around
8% of the
total
population
starts
their day with
radio
. Then a significant increase in its users
is depicted
in graph at approximately 8 a. m. with a
peak
of about 28%. This
peak
is followed
by a declining pattern with slight fluctuations in evening and maintains its initial value again at 6 a. m.

Case of
television
is
typically
different
from
radio
, as no one
starts
their day with T. V.
Just
after 6 a. m. the
total
number of
viewers
watching
television
starts
growing
gradually
and surpasses the value of
radio
users at
around
1 p. m. Then, this patterns experiences fluctuation
around
4 p. m. which
is followed
by a rapid increment.
Consequently
, it hits a
peak
of approximately 48% consumers at 8 p. m. Then,
total
number of users declines
quickly
, hitting a trough of
around
2% at 3 a. m. Then,
Total
number of
viewers
increases
slightly
at 5 a. m.

In conclusion
,
viewers
of
television
peaked up in the evening at
around
8 p. m.
Whereas
radio
consumers are significant at the
start
of their day. Consumers of both
radio
and T. V became exactly equal at 3 a. m.
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